losing to love

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Devious_Britches (smarty pants) on Saturday, 13-May-2006 21:13:14

Woven lies threaded by your skilled tongue wrap me tight in their web.
The urge to lose myself in your soul.
Believing the depth of your love had no measure.
Relinquishing self becoming one with a lie.
Standing before your image, nude, stripped of all.
Watching as you devour the last of my soul, drinking it down with my tears.
Intoxicated by your power over me, you laugh as I disappear as if I never existed.

Post 2 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Saturday, 13-May-2006 22:41:24

As I read this, I thought of myself because that reminded me of an ex-boyfriend. Though your poetry is short, is has depth and carries a world of meaning.

Post 3 by Pure love (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Sunday, 14-May-2006 7:40:15

I agree with Kyla on this. That is really deep.